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Review Summary: This submission needs major revision. It is not clear if the aim is to model a partitive relation between embedded xml elements to the relative parent element in general or in particular for the xsd:sequence element. In the second case the partOf property defined in DOLCE is not enough, better use the Submission:Sequence pattern. In the first case the pattern should be focused on the xsd:all element instead. Additionally, a reengineering pattern for partitive relation in XML-based documents is more general then the XSD case, and probably should be approached at that level, focusing on XSD case in the example section.
Problems: This pattern is named XSD:Sequence embedding. The 'sequence' indicator in XSD means not only a group of element into another (as xsd:all or rdf:Bag), but implies also the fact that those elements must be in a particular order, and this order cannot change, or if it changes, or it is lost in the reengeneering process, the result is a loss of information (see, for example [1]).

The semantic of the 'partOf' ObjectProperty defines pure meronimy relation. It is probably the good solution for representing the containment of one or more XML elements into another (also rdf:Bag could be reengineered in an ontology in the same way). In the XSD case, it can be used to reengineer the 'All' order indicator instead of the 'sequence' one.

Additionally, the example refers to the case in wich the order of the embedded elements is not important.

There are two possibilities: 1) The pattern should be renamed, removing the relation to the 'sequence' and changing it into 'meronimy' or 'partitive' relation, taking the example as meaningful

2) The sequence is a crucial point of this pattern, and this should be better motivated in the example and description of the process.
Relations to Other Patterns: Submissions:PartOf]], [[Submissions:Sequence
Overall Understandability: Actually the aim is not clear.
Clear Problem Description: As above.
Clear Relevance and Consequences: Not clear at the moment.
Clear Figures and Illustrations: Not evaluable at the moment.

Posted: 2009/9/8 Last modified: 2009/09/8

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