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Overall suggestion (score): 0 - needs major revision
The semantic of the 'partOf' ObjectProperty defines pure meronimy relation. It is probably the good solution for representing the containment of one or more XML elements into another (also rdf:Bag could be reengineered in an ontology in the same way). In the XSD case, it can be used to reengineer the 'All' order indicator instead of the 'sequence' one.
Additionally, the example refers to the case in wich the order of the embedded elements is not important.
There are two possibilities: 1) The pattern should be renamed, removing the relation to the 'sequence' and changing it into 'meronimy' or 'partitive' relation, taking the example as meaningful
2) The sequence is a crucial point of this pattern, and this should be better motivated in the example and description of the process.