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Overall suggestion (score): 1 - needs minor revision
The pattern is clearly and extensively described and exemplified. Also, I think it will lead to interesting discussions during WOP, therefore my overall rating of 1.
In the "ontology example" diagram, "learning" is both a subclass and a superclass of "competence" - based on the ETT example, skill <= competence.