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VojtechSvatek about PeriodicInterval (Revision ID: 11172)

Overall suggestion (score): 0 - needs major revision

Problems: It is necessary to distinguish between 'gap' (the distance between an end and a start, for subintervals) and 'period' (normally, the distance between *two* starts or *two* ends).

In fact, the given pattern could be generalized to that of a periodic interval with regular starts and variable length - e.g. an executive meeting that always starts on Wednesday 1pm but takes as much time as needed. One could even imagine the opposite case, e.g. preparation of coffee for the meeting can start (variably) in advance but always ends when the meeting starts - for it to be drunk suitably warm :-)

In the pattern description it is not even clear if the 'start' and 'end' refer to start/end of the whole non-convex interval (start: Tuesday, x-th January, 2010, 0:00) or of the subinterval (start: Tuesday, 0:00; with year 2010 as externally defined context).
Overall Understandability: Partial, see the Problems section.
Clear Problem Description: Yes
Clear Figures and Illustrations: OK
Missing Information: See above.

Posted: 2012/8/31 Last modified: 2012/08/31

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