Reviews:BorisVillazón-Terrazas about TransportPattern

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BorisVillazón-Terrazas about TransportPattern (Revision ID: 11643)

Overall suggestion (score): 1 - needs minor revision

Review Summary: The author claims that the goal of the pattern is to facilitate modelling the movement of mass or energy from one location to another, based on a common persistent frame of reference. However, I'm not sure if the property transportEvent fully covers the aspect of the movement mass. The authors should clarify and improve the description of this.
Reviewer Confidence: I have a medium knowledge of patterns, but I'm not an expert on the energy domain.
Problems: I think the pattern needs a bit more explanation and probably a very interesting use case description.
Community Relevance: Fair
Relation to Best Practices: Fair
Reusability: Good
Relations to Other Patterns: part-of
Overall Understandability: Good
Clear Problem Description: Good
Clear Relevance and Consequences: Fair
Clear Figures and Illustrations: Fair
Missing Information: You neeed to improve the use case scenario.

Posted: 2013/8/6 Last modified: 2013/8/6

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